Developmental Editor: Fiction & Fantasy
Getting Your Story To Its Best And Final Form
Editorial services for fiction authors who need support on a budget.
Specializing in
- Horror
- Gothic
- Psychological Thriller
- Speculative Fiction
- Fiction
- Dark Fantasy
The Editor
Hi, I'm Lucceza! (or Lu for short)
I'm a Manhattan-based fiction writer and developmental editor. I graduated from Michigan State University with a degree in Psychology and minors in Creative Writing and Sociology, which is a big part of why I pay such close attention to character development, flaws, and arc when I'm editing.
Between literature and writing courses, poetry club, and a growing love for horror, I eventually worked up the courage to write my own book. Every stage of that process (outlining, drafting, editing) confirmed something I already suspected: helping a story reach its truest, most final form is the thing I love most.
I care about atmosphere as much as plot, and the architecture of a sentence as much as that of a scene. I work with authors who want their manuscript to do more than move the plot along. They want it to stir up real emotion and linger in a reader's mind.
Services
Editing for every stage of the manuscript
Manuscript Assessment
from $350
A comprehensive editorial letter addressing structure, pacing, character, and atmosphere: a map for your revision.
Best for: you're not sure what stage your manuscript is at, or want big-picture feedback before committing to a full edit.
- A full read-through of your manuscript
- 3–5 page editorial letter covering structure, pacing, character, and atmosphere
- A prioritized list of what to tackle first
Developmental Edit
from $0.020 / word
Deep structural work on plot, tension, voice, and world: the bones of the story, reset.
Best for: early drafts with structural issues: pacing problems, flat characters, plot holes, or unclear stakes.
- In-manuscript comments on structure, plot, and character arcs
- Big-picture editorial letter
- One follow-up call to walk through revisions
Line Edit
from $0.015 / word
Sentence-level craft: rhythm, imagery, and the quiet architecture of dread.
Best for: a structurally solid draft that needs sentence-level craft: voice, rhythm, imagery, and atmosphere.
- Line-by-line prose edits and suggestions
- Notes on voice, tone, and pacing at the sentence level
- Consistency checks (POV, tense, style)
Copyedit & Proofread
from $0.008 / word
Final polish (grammar, consistency, continuity) before the manuscript leaves your hands.
Best for: a polished, "final" draft that just needs grammar, consistency, and typo cleanup before publishing or submission.
- Grammar, punctuation, and spelling corrections
- Continuity and consistency checks (names, timeline, formatting)
- Final read-through pass
Rates may vary by manuscript length and condition. Every project begins with a free 2–page sample edit. Bundled or customized packages are also available on request. Just ask when you reach out.
Process
How a project unfolds
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01
Inquiry & Sample
Send your manuscript's opening pages, genre, and word count. You'll receive a free sample edit within a week.
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Proposal & Timeline
Based on the sample, you'll get a fixed quote, an editing timeline, and a start date.
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The Edit
Your manuscript is edited in full, with in-line comments and an editorial letter on completion.
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Author Review
A call to walk through the edit together, followed by two weeks for your questions.
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Final Polish
A final proofread pass once revisions are complete, leaving your manuscript ready to submit.
A Note on Budget
Every author deserves support
If the services above don't quite align with your budget or the kind of support your manuscript needs, please don't hesitate to reach out anyway. We can discuss a customized alternative with fees adjusted to fit your situation. I'm here to help authors in every way I can.
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Tell me about your manuscript. Every inquiry begins with a free sample edit, no obligation.